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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:09 am

The tom grumbled and dashed ahead in front of Poppyleaf. "Smart move. You have the power to add on?" He chuckled, clawing her face.(We've already agreed that the rogues will win, right?)


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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:35 am

OOC: She's a rogue, loner, whatever.

BIC: Juniper poked her head out of the bushes. (that are surrounding the fight)
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:50 am

OOC: You can't rplay with her yet. Redo your rplay sample semi-literately.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:52 am

OOC: Why?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:00 am

OOC: Can you redo a rplay sample? I ask that in the form...and an advanced topic needs semi-literate samples.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:33 pm

OCC: What does semi-literate mean?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 2:00 pm

From the internet: Having achieved an elementary level of ability in reading and writing. So write it with an elementary level of reading and writing. I think you can find examples on some roleplay sites.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:31 pm

OOC: How high?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:00 pm

OOC: Let me see how high you can go.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:04 pm

OOC: Can you give me an example of how high and how low they are?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:16 pm

OOC: Can you look for yourself? Or you can just try right now.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:22 pm

Example: Juniper crouched, terrified in front of a fox. She didn't know how to fight and was completely defenseless. Suddenly a falcon dived likea thunderbolt at the fox. The fox raced away, taken by surprise. "Kreeeh!" the falcon screeched. Juniper crouched, a bit scared of it. "No need to fear, friend. Come here in peace." Juniper, completely thrown off, shouted back, "You can speak cat?" The falcon screeched a reply, "So what if I can?" "Nothing, nothing." Juniper replied quickly.
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:25 pm

OOC: Make it longer. At least 100 words, and more than 175 would be perfect already.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:30 pm

The falcon cocked his head and screeched, "My name Swiftarrow. Your?" "Juniper." replied Juniper. The falcon ushered her, "Juniper...'tis fine name. I go now, trouble near." Then he spread his wings wide and took off again. Juniper stayed in the same spot she had earlier, confused and bemused a bit. Then she shook her head and went back into the hollow. She curled up on her nest which was lined with down from a pigeon and moss. There she slept, suddenly very tired.
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:33 pm

OOC: Don't make the sentences too little unless you can't describe it more, and instead of "Juniper." replied Juniper, you need to do "Juniper," replied Juniper. It never has a period.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:37 pm

OOC: Ok.
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:44 pm

OOC: Describe it more.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:45 pm

OOC: How?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:16 pm

OOC: Beautiful, unique words that are only used once or twice do not amplify a performance, or in this case, a bio. You must repeat what you are doing, either making it better or keeping it good.

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Post by Avria on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:17 pm

OOC: o.o can you give me an example?
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Post by Rabbit on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:18 pm

OOC: Can you find one yourself? -.-

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Post by Avria on Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:23 am

OOC: Do I have to use one thaty concerns Juniper?
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Post by Rabbit on Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:30 am

OOC: As the main character.

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Post by Avria on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:44 am

OOC Oh, ok.
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Post by Rabbit on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:45 am

OOC: Can you do one?

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